My grandmother makes life worth living for. I honestly eat , breath , & live for her. Anything in life i want to achieve is because of her. i love more than how i love myself.
Observation:
1 He didn't make because of his deformity stop him from loving and living life
2 He was still happy and making little jokes
3 he didn't seem to have a fixed mindset
Q1 Is his way of living comfortable
Q2 do you think about your situation
feeling remorseful
I recall your comment when you first read the quick write and can see that the video made an impression on you. There was a final reflection in which you were asked to re-write your quick write in more general terms. Don't see that. Don't forget to proofread yourself. You wrote: "i love more than how i love myself." That diminishes the power of your sentence.
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